Well, I'm glad you've posted your stories to ARArchive. I'm not sure why I'm drawn to them, but I am. I can see how you've grown as a writer between Dante's Infanzia, College or Cribs and then Addiction. I look forward to reading more of your work, and I'm really looking forward to the next two, three or more chapters or College or Cribs! Watch your continuity on that one...I've noticed a couple of spots where I've gone...wait, how can he be looking at something from CVS when you said he bought it at Walgreens? Or, when Chris went to bed in footed pj's, yet woke up in nothing but a diaper and t-shirt...and both times he was in his 'alternate' reality. I can say though, I love they way you twist your other characters in and out of your work! Please, keep going...I know you'll only get better and better and the stories more and more entertaining and interesting!